Quote from Quargos on May 8, 2011, 6:49 am

Very nice! seemed quite straight forward to me, but it's not easy to make a good map that isn't.

I look forward to seeing more like this.

Quote from jope on May 8, 2011, 7:16 am

Just beautiful. I really like this 1940 style of a map

EDIT: I gave it one more testing and found a big shortcut.

[spoiler]at the very beginning you can jump down and make a portal on the left side and get here pretty quick.

You should just make a fence at the beginning [/spoiler]

Quote from Applzor on May 8, 2011, 10:55 am

terrific map, has just the right feel

Quote from Nighterogue on May 8, 2011, 11:27 am

Fun map, on my first run through just playing the map how I thought it should be played,I got lost a bit, but I eventually got it. I got lost with too many options, it wasn't that the puzzles were too difficult/broken, just didn't see them.

On my second run looking for shortcuts, I found a really big one. Like solve the map in less than 45 seconds with errors big. Here is a link to an unlisted video I uploaded to YouTube on how its done, though its not really hard. A lot like what Jope said, only even more cut out.

Only watch after you have completed the map please.

[spoiler]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hq7zBwXX4Bc[/spoiler]

Quote from msleeper on May 8, 2011, 2:52 pm

Youtube tags are your friend.

Quote from narfomatikus on May 8, 2011, 6:58 pm

best map so far 5/5!!!! you have to fix this shortcut my preposter did. but all the way very nice map, took me some time at the end with the [spoiler]speed gel, to jump true the emancipation grill.[/spoiler]

Quote from lvdarkwolf on May 8, 2011, 10:33 pm

Outstanding, the [spoiler]part with the bounce jell[/spoiler] stumped me for a bit, got that elation feeling when I finally figured it out. That is exactly what the designers planned on, and you pulled it off perfectly. A series of puzzles like this would be great, can't wait for chamber 2.

Quote from BenB on May 9, 2011, 5:14 am

Pro-level mapping as far as I'm concerned. Finding little cheats is the main part of the fun for a lot of people so I'd keep them all. Looks great, nice medium skill puzzles and never got lost at all.

The only genuine problem, and its insignificant really, is there didn't seem to be any reason for the box to disappear after you fly up through the trapdoor. There were no buttons, or fields, it just dematerialises without a cause. If you put a button over your head as you fly up, that could be the trigger to make the mirror box respawn.

If you wanted to make it a bit more difficult you could just remove the top box spawn button and give us an extra puzzle of trying to get the box upstairs rather than disappearing it.

That all said, as it is, it's a marvelous map.

Quote from Scr33nager on May 9, 2011, 1:10 pm

I just registered myself to tell that your map is the best portal 2 map i have played yet, sincerely.
Keep up the good work!