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[SP] [JFTC] Speed Jump Danger

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PCdoc wrote:
Kinda' cramped in places, but that may be what gives the map its own character.
I think if you stretched everything out longer and larger it would have a better feel - but who am I.

Overall a nice puzzle with a tricky beginning because it took me a few tries to get up high enough to shoot a portal in the ledge next to the button. I finally figured out that I had to jump just before running over the portal in the floor or else it slowed me upward ascent to about two-thirds the height needed.

Went I went up there I felt cramped. Then when I went up onto the blue gel pedestal I felt even more cramped - until I stepped sideways onto the grating.
I feel as if this is an impressive beginning to what could have been (i.e. a more complex map that is a real journey to complete). It really has tons of promise - because you have shown the inklings of a master map-maker ! ! ! It shows that you are capable of creating a kick-ass adventure, epic map if you take the time to do it. Congrats !!

Thanks! :D I'll try not to make it so cramp next time. ^^ I really appreciate your feedback, especially the last 4-5 lines. :) Thanks for testing!

sicklebrick wrote:
Cheers, that was fun :)
I ended up getting the cube without the blue gel - not sure if that was intended, but played out pretty smooth from there on.

Haha, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it and had fun. :) Yes, it was intended. ^^ Thanks for testing! Cheers! :D

RogerL wrote:
This map still needs some improvements. I finished it without using the pedestal button in the first room, without the cube, and without the repulsion gel. And I am no ninja. I would suggest taking some length off of the catwalk to the exit elevator. Also, all of those peek-a-boo shots might not go over well with average players, but that is obviously your choice.

Okay, noted. Thanks for the feedback! Thanks for testing! :)

This chamber is underground. I think this is very hard for me to solve it. (Because I am new player of Portal 2...) I like to play in Modern Chamber so I hope you make the "Underground Chamber With Modern Lift" chamber. (I like your chamber Sign!)

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