[SP] Fatal Choices
Ugh. This was my first map, and, in all honesty, I'm quite ashamed of it. Let this be an example of how NOT to make maps. I gotten much better since this, though, and I highly recommend NOT downloading this one. Play at your own risk, and be prepared for something absolutely terrible.
File Name: SP_Fatal_Choices.rar
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Hello! I have played your map about 15 min after you uploaded it.
TBH I didn't really like the puzzles, but I didn't hate them either. A mapping suggestion would be to use more textures and align them properly, use door frames (your doors stuck out the side. Try playing ur map, goin gthrough the first door, and turning around.) and make better puzzles.
Good job for first map.
Yes I was planning on making my first update aligning the textures, since I recently learned how. Also, I wasn't really going for hard puzzles. Just the concept of portal, since it was my first. Thanks for the help!
I'd advice to put up puzzles first in the WIP section, where you can focus on finishing the map's mechanics and looks.
I used the "released maps" section to just work out a few remaining bugs.
Still nice to see you start out with mapping 
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Needs more practice! Like this, it's just the embryo of a map - but I reckon how you worked on the atmosphere, what with the insistent sounds and messages. Just don't expect to be able and express it properly with very basic skills. I suggest you turn this into a WIP thread, to keep working on it with playtesters and avoid risks.
I'm playing custom maps and record my first time of playing them. So the run is not perfect and may not use only intended ways, but maybe it can let you see how other people may understand the map or you could just enjoy someone playing this map for entertainment.
Anyways, here is the recording:
1k88_2TVWLw
(Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1k88_2TVWLw)
Also note the video description for more feedback and my signature for additional project information.
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For everyone who keeps telling me to move this to the WIP section, I've already finished this map and I'm currently working on another map. This puzzle is supposed to be very short and easy. It's not that I'm not finished. However, I will be updating for any bugs you people might find.
Well then I will tell you that these maps take time to finish. Take more time on your next one and put more puzzles in it.
BTW, in that map, as you can see from that video, that platform raises really randomly. Is there any rhyme or reason to it?