Quote from RectorRocks on August 9, 2012, 10:42 pm

This map is awesome! I like how you use the Announcer's lines, the Relaxation Vault, and the diversity vents. I did a blindrun for you but I'll upload it later.
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[spoiler]-I like how if you got sucked in the Diversity Vent, you see how you go through the tubes, just like the Art Therapy course in Portal 2 Co-op.
-I didn't use the angled panel. I think I solved it in an unintended solution. xP
-I was a little disappointed that behind the exit door of the Relaxation Vault was not Test Chamber 00. But it was still creative that you changed it a little because most mappers do that.
-I liked how theres alot of secret areas and Ratman Dens, very interesting. You should let the radio play some music though, maybe Still Alive or Exile Vilify?
-I also liked how you revisited most of Chapter 1's areas, like the Oracle Turret area, the Relaxation Vault and what looks like Test Chamber 02. Also, loved the smooth jazz. ^^v[/spoiler]
Overall I would give it 5/5! Excellent work! Hope to see more maps made by you!

Quote from Mr. P. Kiwi on August 10, 2012, 2:36 am

RectorRocks wrote:

1. I didn't use the angled panel. I think I solved it in an unintended solution. xP
2. I liked how theres alot of secret areas and Ratman Dens, very interesting. You should let the radio play some music though, maybe Still Alive or Exile Vilify?

1. [spoiler]I know there's a way to shoot a portal over to the 'ceiling panel' above the cube. I tried to block that solution but I guess it's not perfect.[/spoiler] But if this isn't how you solved that, do upload your blindrun.
2. Thanks. The radio room was intended to lead to an escape route, but because of time constraints I had to delete that part. However I left that small bts area, and added some Ratman props. I really wanted the radio to play Exile Vilify but I just couldn't find the sound clip... And again, because of time constraint I just gave up searching for it. (Question: what's the name of Exile Vilify in the sound library?)

Quote from RectorRocks on August 10, 2012, 2:42 am

Mr. P. Kiwi wrote:

(Question: what's the name of Exile Vilify in the sound library?)

"music.sp_a2_dual_lasers_r1"

Hold on, I'm uploading my blindrun , will be up soon.

EDIT: Uploaded! Go watch it, thanks!

Quote from RectorRocks on August 10, 2012, 3:37 am

Mr. P. Kiwi wrote:

...do upload your blindrun.

Heres my blindrun: vTJEd-lRP08
Enjoy! And tell me if I solved in an unintedned solution. xP

Quote from ChickenMobile on August 10, 2012, 10:47 am

My review:
Do not read if you are judge!

[spoiler]This was a highly enjoyable map, it was more an exploratory / transition instead of a puzzle map, however with a little more tweaking and detailing it could even be misinterpreted as one of Valve's work.

The dialogue used was humorous, the ambience great, plus the detailing was very well done. <redacted>... I noticed a few things that looked copy/pasted from Valves maps. I am not a fan of copying other people's work, for any reason.

I liked the little secret area too (even though it wasn't really secret).

Keep up the good work! (make sure you polish this map further)[/spoiler]

Quote from Mr. P. Kiwi on July 6, 2013, 3:18 am

If you mean the tube rides, I used the instance Valve used in the hub map. If you mean the "oracle turret" room, I made it from scratch, and I didn't even thit that's what it'll turn into, it's just a room with vents... And if you mean the relaxation chamber, I also made it from scratch, but to save mental effort, I used a picture of the portal 2 one as a concept.