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#11 · August 26, 2012, 2:48 am

Editor-in-chief here, volunteering my impeccable grammar skills if your proofreaders die in a fire or something.

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#12 · August 26, 2012, 9:51 am

Aicxe wrote:

Editor-in-chief here, volunteering my impeccable grammar skills if your proofreaders die in a fire or something.

#13 · August 29, 2012, 11:20 am

Hm. UsCobra has decided to leave out five pages. So random, Next_gen, Aicxe, if you still want to read, contact me, because I think it is favourable to have two different opinions.

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#14 · August 29, 2012, 5:45 pm

Brainstone wrote:

Hm. UsCobra has decided to leave out five pages. So random, Next_gen, Aicxe, if you still want to read, contact me, because I think it is favourable to have two different opinions.

Hey hey hey, I told you why I left out 5 pages.

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#15 · August 29, 2012, 6:09 pm

I didn't want to accuse you. I am sorry if it sounded that way.

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#16 · August 29, 2012, 8:11 pm

Brainstone wrote:

I didn't want to accuse you. I am sorry if it sounded that way.

OOHHHH. My bad actually. I thought you said "He left out 5 pages, so random!" But you were actually talking to the guy, Random.

Fail on my part

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