Quote from josepezdj on June 1, 2011, 11:06 am

Hi Onailag. Well, your pictures are amazing. I guess that you are making a mappack or a single mode campaign, right? well, the screenshots are great!

Keep on with your work and release something soon!

For the contest, I'm afraid you are using many custom material and it won't be possible to use this map for it because it's against the rules.

But keep on working on this! It's really awesome!

Cheers

Quote from ChickenMobile on June 1, 2011, 12:15 pm

I agree very nice!

English be very bad... lol

You lost me at you drink the cup of ?poue.

Quote from onailag on June 1, 2011, 1:22 pm

Close topic please

Quote from ChickenMobile on June 1, 2011, 1:59 pm

In that video your map looks very nice.

Overall this is very different to what Valve has made as you do not even have a portal gun for the whole of the level. It has a completely different feel, like your in a forbidden place or an extremely old test chamber.

The only thing that may be a bit confusing is the amount of buttons, with no indication of what they do.
Also when you pushed the button to spawn the cube, the other cube just disappeared. Was this mean't to happen?

P.S. I tried to make my sentences make as much sense as possible for you to translate.

Quote from onailag on June 1, 2011, 2:11 pm

I do not put all on the portal gun.
For large numbers of button, normally I'll put the text that'll also be cryptic.
The texts will be in French.
Yes I see that when one presses the button the cube disappear.
I board the relatives try to brush that evaporates the cube to have an effect.
I board and I was trying not get what I want.

Quote from ChickenMobile on June 1, 2011, 2:17 pm

onailag wrote:

For large numbers of button, normally I'll put the text that'll also be cryptic.

I saw a couple of words every now and again appear on the screen. However I had no idea what they mean't. I guess making an English version is a good idea? You'll probably need someone to translate it for you. The translator you are using at the moment is pretty horrible.

Quote from KenJeKenny!? on June 1, 2011, 5:26 pm

Finally somebody working with a theme besides the test chamber-theme...

Awesome work... but i think it's still very unclear on what to do sometimes...

And every plant moving is very unrealistic...

But definitly a 8/10 for the originality and the awesome looks!

Quote from onailag on June 1, 2011, 7:23 pm

Thank you very much

Quote from iWork925 on June 1, 2011, 7:39 pm

I can translate french to actual English. That people can read normally.