Quote from Lpfreaky90 on March 21, 2012, 4:28 pm

Nice map! Good clean style; nice details like the tube; the puzzle wasn't too hard but fun. Lighting and textures were good: very impressive first map

4/5: Great!

Quote from zivi7 on March 21, 2012, 5:19 pm

I found one problem with the door to the next area in the starting room. When you approach the door and let it open and then step back again, it closes and doesn't open anymore. Then you are stuck in the starting room.

Quote from soad667 on March 21, 2012, 5:27 pm

Great map. Nicely detailed, especially for a first. Well done!

The only issues i noticed were...
1. A blue line on the side of the observation window. <image>
2. Part of the wall at the exit room becomes visible when it should not. <image>

Quote from Random on March 21, 2012, 6:07 pm

The puzzle didn't really make me think, which I guess is subjective, but it's off to a nice start. Visuals worked well in that everything was aligned and the right amount of light. I wouldn't say they are anything special, though. Other smaller details such as the vents are nice to have. There are a few other details I should mention:

1. In the first room, you can shoot a portals up through the pipes onto the black ceiling.
2. There are some things that you can put a portal behind but probably shouldn't because they float there. Namely the check marks, timers, and the broken floor tiles in the second room.
3. (Mostly noticed this in the first room) You should try to surround all your glass with a frame. You can use either a model or a plastic texture. I didn't always do this at first either, but I think it looks much better and separates it from the rest of the materials.

Quote from toaster on March 24, 2012, 9:57 am

Thank you for your comments. I tried to fix the bugs you mentioned, but I don't know how to update my file. How can I update it without creating a new topic?

Quote from andyb on March 24, 2012, 10:27 am

You should be able to edit your topic then upload a new file.Just make sure the file name has changed. ie: add a V2 or something

Edit:You can manage your files from user control panel also but I dunno if that allows you to replace files

Quote from toaster on March 24, 2012, 11:28 am

I put the new file in my first post as an attachment. Is this the right way to update files?

Quote from andyb on March 24, 2012, 11:33 am

No but it will work till someone else tells you the proper way.

Quote from Random on March 24, 2012, 3:34 pm

There should just be an "Edit" button at the top of your download page.