Quote from Dilbao on June 23, 2011, 9:35 am

First, some buttons need labeling. Well, that's said, now the real thing.

Dying while trying is a part of puzzle solving. However, I found dying repeatedly just because of the map's desing is annoying, very, very annoying. When I jumped on that first faith plate at the left side, I found myself dead in the water. Alright, that can happen, but there is no place to avoid that plate to look around. Eventually, I solved it, but it wasn't a pleasant feeling at the end.

I can suggest a possible way to change it: Instead of goo, you can place another faith plate to destination that jump to back over you start. That way you can tell player it is part of the puzzle without punishing.

Also, I traped myself on one of the the lower plates. I put hardlight in front of it then jumped on it and I got stuck between hardlight and plate, no way to return.

Overall look of the map is fine, but puzzles need tweaking.

Quote from wrathofmobius on June 23, 2011, 10:12 am

Great suggestions. I'll try to get those in the next version of the map. I'm now thinking of expanding the "hallway" puzzle and turning it into a larger puzzle - maybe it's the means to get to a larger puzzle. However, that will have to wait because I'm currently between desktops, and Hammer took my computer's resources to the limit. :/

Quote from wrathofmobius on July 27, 2011, 11:55 pm

V2 is up! Here's the changelog:
* Removed that horrid AFP hallway and made it into a slightly better puzzle, similar to sp_a2_pull_the_rug, but with HLBs and excursion funnels.
* Added indicator strips where I thought they needed adding.

I still think the laser cube puzzle is a bit too fiddly but that's up to all of you to decide.