Quote from Lpfreaky90 on December 8, 2011, 8:29 pm

The maps works quite okay.
However, the looks of the maps however, can really use some more attention.
A few things:
1) Lighting was off. For example a cool and warm light next to each other.
2) The place where you start is really odd. Try adding elevators (start and end)
3) The theme of the map is really different from anything seen in portal. This could be good, but it's a bit messy.
4) The puzzle is very easy (cube+button -> hlb) a few portals and that's it. A bit more challenge would be interest.
5) The part where you use the hlb's is very tight. You can hardly move .

so all in all, it still needs work 3/5. I haven't rated it yet, I might do after some things have changed in the level.

~Lp

Quote from Djinndrache on December 8, 2011, 11:14 pm

I'm playing custom maps and record my first time of playing them. So the run is not perfect and may not use only intended ways, but maybe it can let you see how other people may understand the map or you could just enjoy someone playing this map for entertainment.
Anyways, here is the recording:

P8lIj3gAhlo
(Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8lIj3gAhlo)

Also note the video description for more feedback and my signature for additional project information.

Quote from TheCakeIsASpy on December 9, 2011, 4:06 am

Well, it looks messy and it's really easy, just cube-button and some bridge jumping. The textures don't blend and you just threw a skybox for no reason.

For a first map, if it is a first map, it's okay.