[SP] Wheatleys missing chamber 1
Quote from cheezecrazy on May 30, 2011, 2:53 pmMy mapping contest entry. A wheatley inspired test with a basic puzzle.
Changes
fixed -
broken tv
cube running into water and getting stuck
area portal errors
getting stuck and having to kill your self
overpowered turretadded-
glass
cube dropper
retextured
wheatleys monitor
lab window
better toxic slimeFile Name: Sp_wheatleys_missing_chambers_1.zip
File Size: 2.28 MiB
Click here to download Wheatleys missing chamber 1
My mapping contest entry. A wheatley inspired test with a basic puzzle.
Changes
fixed -
broken tv
cube running into water and getting stuck
area portal errors
getting stuck and having to kill your self
overpowered turret
added-
glass
cube dropper
retextured
wheatleys monitor
lab window
better toxic slime
File Name: Sp_wheatleys_missing_chambers_1.zip
File Size: 2.28 MiB
Click here to download Wheatleys missing chamber 1
Quote from timefiller on May 30, 2011, 4:52 pmKeep working on it..
1. Wheatley Turret walked into the goo before I entered the room. Couldn't reach him.
2. Went across the gap and couldn't get back a crossed without killing myself.
Keep working on it..
1. Wheatley Turret walked into the goo before I entered the room. Couldn't reach him.
2. Went across the gap and couldn't get back a crossed without killing myself.
Quote from Another Bad Pun on May 30, 2011, 5:31 pmI played it and there are some things that I should point out.
[spoiler]1.You seem to have a problem with your areaportals:
sp_wheatleys_missing_chambers_10000.jpg2.Please don't set the turret on super damage, I know what its meant for but there are lots of better ways to acheive that.
3. Set your toxic water texture to something like nature/toxicslime_a2_laser_over_goo, not just a plain old green water texture.
4. You could use a dropper for the box turrets and a frame for the camera screen, not just floating in the hallway.
5. AAARG NOOOOO COMPANION CUBE!!!!!!!![/spoiler]
That is all.
I played it and there are some things that I should point out.
2.Please don't set the turret on super damage, I know what its meant for but there are lots of better ways to acheive that.
3. Set your toxic water texture to something like nature/toxicslime_a2_laser_over_goo, not just a plain old green water texture.
4. You could use a dropper for the box turrets and a frame for the camera screen, not just floating in the hallway.
5. AAARG NOOOOO COMPANION CUBE!!!!!!!!
That is all.
Quote from xdiesp on May 30, 2011, 6:28 pmIs there a room which is connected properly to the next?
Nothing personal against your mapping skills, but at present time nothing works and all looks obscene. But the contest is 1 week away, you can fix this!
Is there a room which is connected properly to the next?
Nothing personal against your mapping skills, but at present time nothing works and all looks obscene. But the contest is 1 week away, you can fix this!
Quote from bjs0 on May 30, 2011, 7:58 pmNot bad. Not bad at all. But sooo many bugs. In addition to what has already been mentioned, I noticed the following:
- The water does not destroy cubes, and considering the cube becomes irretrievable when dropped in, it should. Which leads me to...
- The level needs a cube vent. Preferably one with the standard "fizzle cube" button next to it.
- When you touch the emancipation grill leading down to the elevator, the portals, [spoiler]which at that time should be holding the cube against the wall button to keep the door open[/spoiler], disappear. The player could easily become stuck if they don't move through quickly.
Oh, and if this is a Wheatley chamber, there should be a big Wheatley face monitor on the wall, don't you think?
Not bad. Not bad at all. But sooo many bugs. In addition to what has already been mentioned, I noticed the following:
- The water does not destroy cubes, and considering the cube becomes irretrievable when dropped in, it should. Which leads me to...
- The level needs a cube vent. Preferably one with the standard "fizzle cube" button next to it.
- When you touch the emancipation grill leading down to the elevator, the portals,
Oh, and if this is a Wheatley chamber, there should be a big Wheatley face monitor on the wall, don't you think?
Quote from cheezecrazy on May 30, 2011, 8:13 pmI went back through and tried to repair all the problems that you guys had listed if you find any more feel free to add them. Ill update the maps with fixes. I knew that the rooms hadn't been connected properly so i went back in and re textured to make it less noticeable a few exceptions maybe. Ill try to add wheatleys monitor but im new to mapping (5 days new) so i have to figure it out. I posted with bugs so i could get criticism thanks for those who post i have tried to fix everyting i hope its better now.
I went back through and tried to repair all the problems that you guys had listed if you find any more feel free to add them. Ill update the maps with fixes. I knew that the rooms hadn't been connected properly so i went back in and re textured to make it less noticeable a few exceptions maybe. Ill try to add wheatleys monitor but im new to mapping (5 days new) so i have to figure it out. I posted with bugs so i could get criticism thanks for those who post i have tried to fix everyting i hope its better now.
Quote from bjs0 on May 31, 2011, 8:29 pmNice! Looks like you got all of the issues fixed. Only thing left is to polish it up before the contest deadline. Good luck.
Nice! Looks like you got all of the issues fixed. Only thing left is to polish it up before the contest deadline. Good luck.
Quote from cheezecrazy on May 31, 2011, 11:21 pmim going to extend the test by adding two maybe three puzzles after the original with different challenges and MUCH cleaner rooms. I also going to clean it up a lot and retexture to add better theme
im going to extend the test by adding two maybe three puzzles after the original with different challenges and MUCH cleaner rooms. I also going to clean it up a lot and retexture to add better theme
Quote from cheezecrazy on May 31, 2011, 11:24 pmre bufutda if you mean the wheatley screen its an instance
re bufutda if you mean the wheatley screen its an instance
