Quote from sirfluffs on October 17, 2011, 6:13 pm

how about some info...

Quote from Lpfreaky90 on October 17, 2011, 6:22 pm

some info: there are turrets! and they can kill you!

I think it's a great puzzle! However, there's a lot you can improve to make it a good map as well!

some things I noticed:
* I got stuck in the start elevator, when I tried to hide from the first turret in the first room.
* The funnels stick out of the wall.
* The final door opens in nothingness, instead of a frame.
* The second quicksave was on a point where I almost got shot by turrets
* There are a lot of misaligned textures
* Fizzlers clipped with other textures
* There are no fizzlers under water
(the last three points really decreased my framerate
* I thought it would be needed to keep the laser powered in order to get to the next part of the level, while instead triggering once was enough. That kept me quite busy for a while.
* A lot of portable surfaces stick out of the wall. You can also carve them into the wall, which looks nicer.
* The first hard light bridge in the first room looks like it can be jumped on, however, the distance is a bit too far, so you can't

I made my video's:
Part one:
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Part two:
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Quote from guckzurlinse on October 18, 2011, 4:39 pm

ATTENTION PLEASE READ
sorry for the first one (and my enlgish) , because it is a *.bsp. ok this is my first map. maybe it is difficult. check it out and give me your review. But... i don? t know how i can see your commantries. and the walkthrough video on youtube is a lie, ?cause i can?t make a good screen record. mail me, i think it is the best way ou can help me. send mails to azrails_destiny@hotmail.de

File Name: deside.7z
File Size: 18.57 KiB
Click here to download turrets and chaos 2 ( sry )

Quote from guckzurlinse on October 18, 2011, 5:35 pm

which software do you use to record your desktop ? i wanna make a walkthrough, without flying ^^ but you are right with your points. i used hammer in this map the first time. i think i should set two more turrets on the last room, so the players have to shoot down for a "light wall". the next map will be better. but before i have learn a lot of things ^^. sry for pllayers, i upload this map two times because i think portal 2 can?t read .bsp. so i have upload the same level in vmf :S

Quote from Lpfreaky90 on October 18, 2011, 6:26 pm

I used FRAPS to record myscreen.

(I used the noclip because I thought I had to go in there and try it, sorry :p)
.bsp is what usual maps are,
.vmf files are just the map files, so how the map is build
.vtf files are whole folders, and they are currently not working, but this can be fixed by unpacking the vmf files.

You also don't need to add a whole new file, you can just update this one!
If you do, please add a changelog, so we can see what has changed

Quote from TheCakeIsASpy on October 19, 2011, 9:13 am

The turrets ruined it for me.

Quote from benvent on October 20, 2011, 6:00 pm

@ theCakeisaspy: What's wrong with the turrets. They were not difficult to work around.
I enjoyed it.

Quote from guckzurlinse on October 21, 2011, 4:39 pm

This map is in WIP and is my first map. I have change a lot of things now. I think now you can enjoy much trouble.

File Name: deside.7z
File Size: 1.04 MiB
Click here to download Turrets And Chaos

Quote from guckzurlinse on October 21, 2011, 5:10 pm

i wanna make a walkthrough video but i can?t. Fraps just record 30sec. what can i do please help !!!