Quote from Logic on June 10, 2012, 12:03 pm

You could have edited your last thread instead of creating a new one -.-

Quote from Shakky on June 10, 2012, 4:52 pm

I see you created another post of this same map. I'm copying my review to here also if this is where you want it.

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Great looks but still pretty sloppy work. Alot of little exploits which would be pretty easily fixed.
I will go over chamber by chamber.

Chamber 1: Best one of these 3. Puzzle is easy but enjoyable. Only problem is that you can jump most of the gaps which kinda ruins the puzzle. Also the goo seems to disapear from time to time. See my video for demonstration.

Chamber 2: Really confusing because the second button is hidden and there is no indication of another button needed. If you just would have added a timer that starts clicking after the first button people would know that there is something else to find. Again easy to exploit. See the video.

Chamber 3: Really pointless and confusing. Fizzler doesn't fizzle objects, no indication and the puzzle can be completed without the lightbridge. Faith plate bounces you through the unsolid roof and the level ends without elevator and doesn't disconnect.

Here is my video:
[spoiler]BIATDKVW6Wk[/spoiler]
It contains blindruns and least portal runs of all 3 chambers. Least portal runs should show some exploits I found.

Also I think that your forum post could use something. Maybe add a name and some description next time. I liked the looks but because of overall sloppyness I can't give it more than 3/5.

Seems to be WIP in my opinion.

EDIT. I see you added a name and description now if one can call that a description. Tell us something about you map maybe? It can be longer than 6 words.

Also I forgot to add that when I started doing the least portal runs starting elevators didn't work from time to time.

Quote from quatrus on June 11, 2012, 7:03 pm

Nice map set, needs a bit of work yet to clean up. Notes above - agree...
Thanks for mapping.

Quote from Lpfreaky90 on June 11, 2012, 9:17 pm

These maps are a lot better then your previous ones
I think Shakky has a lot of valid points, work on those and you have a nice set of maps. The details are looking good, but it's just the last few bits that create a bit of a problem. Like the non-solid roof in level 3 and the metal thing that's sticking out when you want to walk on the hlb in level 2.