Quote from Sejievan on February 24, 2014, 3:08 pm

PICS

Quote from quatrus on February 24, 2014, 7:18 pm

Absolutely love this series....
Got it downloaded this time - took a long time to download but worked - maybe too many downloading?
Had an issue with the one dot bridge coming up - went back and reset the one dot activator then it came up?
There are a lot of ant lines to follow [spoiler]and it took a while to find all the triangles that had to be activated to exit that chamber[/spoiler]- not sure how else to do it though - nice puzzle.
Last chamber was beautiful - moving the cube around was just OK - plenty of time - dropping it on the exit activator aarrghhh - do F6...
I guess there is a part 5 coming as the exit was a blocked up wall...
Thanks for creating....well done!

Quote from Sejievan on February 24, 2014, 7:39 pm

Nope man, you still didn't finished this one the blocked exit isn't the end XD

Quote from quatrus on February 25, 2014, 4:19 pm

Sejievan wrote:

Nope man, you still didn't finished this one the blocked exit isn't the end XD

Arrgggh - good excuse to play the map set again...
Wow there was a whole lot more. I see you added some X's and there was an "action" on entering the first exit - that didn't happen my first time through. I really like the hunting - keep it up - more please... thanks for creating.

Quote from Sejievan on February 25, 2014, 6:10 pm

quatrus wrote:

Sejievan wrote:

Nope man, you still didn't finished this one the blocked exit isn't the end XD

Arrgggh - good excuse to play the map set again...
Wow there was a whole lot more. I see you added some X's and there was an "action" on entering the first exit - that didn't happen my first time through. I really like the hunting - keep it up - more please... thanks for creating.

Thx, i corrected that immediately after saw your first post =D

Quote from User on February 26, 2014, 8:52 am

Awesome Detailing, was very fun to explore !

The Easter Egg was also good xD

Quote from RogerL on February 28, 2014, 12:19 pm

I thought the puzzles in this map were much stronger than in your previous maps; I liked them a lot. I came across a few issues: You often have both antlines and labels to the same thing, which makes it visually cluttered and a little confusing, but I know you are trying to make it clear what does what. I didn't notice any autosaves; I think there should be at least one between every set of rooms. As you mention in the description, your English is not the best, and with all the text in this map, it became a problem. You might want to have your texts corrected by a native English speaker, which there are plenty of on this site, for example. In room three (the one with the yellow portal at the end of the funnel), if you have your portal behind the [spoiler]fake[/spoiler] exit door, and you close the [spoiler]door with the terminal[/spoiler], the funnel goes right through the door. I also felt that making the player try to land a cube on a distant button, which is placed at the edge of the floor, was asking too much. It must have taken me at least 15 tries to get the cube to stay on the button and if you miss, there is no way to correct it or try again except to respawn the cube. In the last set of rooms, I lost the [spoiler]disk[/spoiler] once and had to noclip to get it back. These are mostly small issues, but I hope my mentioning them will be helpful. Thanks for creating another great map.

Quote from Sejievan on March 1, 2014, 4:01 pm

RogerL wrote:

I thought the puzzles in this map were much stronger than in your previous maps; I liked them a lot. I came across a few issues: You often have both antlines and labels to the same thing, which makes it visually cluttered and a little confusing, but I know you are trying to make it clear what does what. I didn't notice any autosaves; I think there should be at least one between every set of rooms. As you mention in the description, your English is not the best, and with all the text in this map, it became a problem. You might want to have your texts corrected by a native English speaker, which there are plenty of on this site, for example. In room three (the one with the yellow portal at the end of the funnel), if you have your portal behind the [spoiler]fake[/spoiler] exit door, and you close the [spoiler]door with the terminal[/spoiler], the funnel goes right through the door. I also felt that making the player try to land a cube on a distant button, which is placed at the edge of the floor, was asking too much. It must have taken me at least 15 tries to get the cube to stay on the button and if you miss, there is no way to correct it or try again except to respawn the cube. In the last set of rooms, I lost the [spoiler]disk[/spoiler] once and had to noclip to get it back. These are mostly small issues, but I hope my mentioning them will be helpful. Thanks for creating another great map.

Thx dude any Feedback is helpful, as for the autosaves, every beginning of the chambers has one, and if you be interested you could help me on the correction of the texts, i will be very thankfull

Quote from RogerL on March 2, 2014, 7:39 pm

I now have screenshots of all the signs, notes, posters, and other text in your map. I'll send you my suggested corrections by PM on this site tomorrow.