Quote from ForbiddenDonut on August 7, 2011, 6:35 am

Cramped, single-textured and hack-sawed brushes that give away that you built a giant box around the map. Amateur work even in the best light, the puzzle has absolutely no thinking elements - just luck with the penalty of death if you ever make a wrong step.

I suggest that you play the main campaign on commentary to get a feel for the design and practice of mapping. Just because you finish it, doesn't mean it's release worthy.

Quote from xdiesp on August 7, 2011, 3:24 pm

First attempt at Hammer, unavoidably ugly as sin. It's understandable since you're still learning, but these practice tests shouldn't be released in the open - it's too early. Should probably be pulled from the downloads.

Quote from Lostprophetpunk on August 7, 2011, 3:37 pm

Perhaps a read through this fabulous guide on the style of your maps can help help you.

Quote from CookieNinja8 on August 17, 2011, 9:55 am

I like the concept, but the map was just hard to look at. I understand if it's your first map, though. This is pretty good for a first map, but I wouldn't say it's uploadable content yet. But, hey, that's coming from someone who's first map was a room with a broken gel dropper, a cube and a button.

Keep trying, and you'll get it!

Quote from historyboi on August 28, 2011, 7:45 pm

also the block dropper needs to be fixed, cube did not hit button when i threw it in. also the turrets in botom need to be fixed, i was able to grab 2 and throw those at the others to clear the bottom room of turrets