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[SP] Small room (update1)

My first map for Portal 2. The passage will take no more than a couple minutes.
I hope without bugs:)
Added a new level.
Optimized levels. Added VPK file.

File Name: small_room.rar
File Size: 4.97 MiB
Click here to download Small room (update1)

only crashes the game

edit: lol what a fail data-name. dont use points in a name :roll:

Well nice ideas but too easy.

Got ur filename right please. No spaces and no points.

Yeah,nice ideas.They're pretty good. :D

Keep up the good work. :P

This was easy, but good.

Very nice ideas on the first map. Easy, but

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the laser part with Wheatley
was funny. Second map was good as well, but for some reason didn't load after the first one (screen went black and I could hear my Portal gun/jumping sounds, but no new level loaded). Had to load it manually.

Fixed bug with downloading.

The maps flow together (now, at least). I admire the cinematic at the beginning, timing on those can take some work (not sure how Hammer works on timing things like that, but regardless). While it's a little on the boring side now and then from the player's perspective, mostly because you've heard/seen similar things in the main game.

The first actual puzzle is good, again reminiscent of some main-game puzzles, but well done.

The second room is good. You may want to

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add a line in the redirection cube delivery tube that doesn't allow more than one
, but that's just me.
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The "SPAAAAAACE" button was an odd, non sequitur touch, but I only felt stupid when I realized that I hadn't pushed one of the room's buttons yet.

Good start. Look forward to seeing what else you make.

quite easy but very enjoyable :) keep em comin'

I was frustrated at first, but finally enjoyed finishing this map.

Bug: In the first room, you can jump up on the desk, then out the hole Wheatley came in, leaving you outside the map.

The sequencing in the first room isn't clear. I stumbled my way through it, but really don't know how.

While the puzzles were conceptually easy, I had a hard time executing them because my timing stinks. Not your fault, of course, but it detracted from the experience having to try one simple move over and over again just to get it right.

I liked it well enough overall to give it a 4/5, even with the confusing bits and the bug.

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